Overview of the Sakib Intermediate Version
The Sakib intermediate version of the cosmetics guidebook represents an interim output in which Sakib reviewed and edited the English-language content based on Nusrat's final v3 draft, which ran to 42 pages. It was submitted on August 31, 2025 and served as the last internal review stage before the final draft was confirmed.
As the local Bangladesh research lead, Sakib reviewed the draft not only for near-native English quality but also for logical consistency, the accuracy of local market information, and the appropriateness of wording for Korean readers. The version includes a total of 87 revisions and comments, of which 15 major changes are expected to be incorporated into the final draft.
Classification of Review Items
Sakib's review can be grouped into four main categories: grammar and usage, data accuracy, logical consistency, and appropriateness of expression. Grammar and usage account for the largest number of edits, but revisions related to data accuracy have the greatest impact on the overall quality and credibility of the guidebook.
| Category | Cases | Main Issues | Chapter | Severity |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Grammar and usage | 52 | Tense consistency, articles, prepositions | All chapters | Minor |
| Data accuracy | 15 | Inconsistent figures, source checks | CH2 and CH4 | Important |
| Logical consistency | 8 | Context conflicts, duplication | CH3 and CH8 | Moderate |
| Appropriateness of expression | 7 | Overly positive tone, need for neutral phrasing | CH6 and CH8 | Moderate |
| Structure and format | 3 | Table format, numbering system | CH5 and CH7 | Minor |
| Comments requiring confirmation | 20 | Items requiring Nusrat's verification | All chapters | Pending |
Details of the 15 Major Revisions
Among the major revisions, the most important change was the update to market-size data. After Nusrat completed v3, first-half 2025 figures became available, lifting the market estimate from USD 800 million to USD 820 million and revising the growth rate upward from 9.5% to 10.2%. The online distribution share also increased from 18% to 20%, reflecting the rapid expansion of digital channels. In the section on K-Beauty competition (CH6), Sakib replaced overly optimistic wording with more neutral analysis, strengthening the report's credibility.
Preparation for the Final Draft
The Sakib intermediate version substantially improved the English quality and data accuracy of Nusrat's v3 draft through 87 revisions and comments. Core indicators such as market size, growth rate, and online distribution share were updated to the latest 2025 figures, while the K-Beauty discussion was recast in more neutral language to improve credibility. After Nusrat responds to the outstanding comments and both language versions are synchronized, the project is expected to move to final-draft confirmation on September 10 and publication on September 25.